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LoZ: Half the Sky... Part 1

 A tall young gentleman in a rather nice dark business suit and designer shades, walked through the double doors of the establishment.  It was like most places of it's kind, dark and gloomy, with only the small windows, one on each door which were some what shaded, to naturally light up the joint.  The bright, but brief light from the outside world upon his entry, however, seemed to make the patrons and employees run and scurry or at the very least shade their eyes with their hands like cockroaches or vampires...  The rest of the large oblong windows were covered with sheets to hide the sun and preying eyes, with the remaining dim light coming from antique looking lamps that had little frills hanging off of the different coloured coverings that were on various end tables and also from the lighted crystal chandeliers above, as well as ceiling fans that tried to keep it cool in the enclosed space.

 The smoke was thick, thick enough to choke a horse and the young man covered his mouth with his fist as he coughed.  There was pungent incense, which smelled like sickeningly sweet decaying fruit, burning and it intertwined in his nostrils making him slightly dizzy at first.  The central area was filled with couches placed in the shape of a twisted corrupted Triforce and was filled with other gentleman, some smoking and some of whom already had their companions for the night.  Females, mostly children, some even very young were on their laps for entertainment.  There were also small wooden tables and chairs here and there doting the room, a billiards table which had some holes from a few careless cigarette ashes, a medium sized bar with mostly cheap drinks and an old fashioned coined music box off to the side.

 The proprietor, an older middle aged woman which sat behind a brown glossy desk and was dressed finely in a red velvet form hugging dress with animal furs, ordered two of the girls not currently engaged to welcome the young man.  They got out of line from against the wall with out a word, trying to bring him to an empty part of a near by couch.  But he refused, mentioning it was much too crowded, so the young girls just traced their fingers over his nicely defined back, shoulders, neck and chest, playing with his long necktie which was tied around his white buttoned shirt.  One even roaming her fingers with a light touch over his smooth handsome face and almost lifted his glasses off, until he had reached up and restrained her, shaking his head.  He did not hurt her, but she knew very well not to antagonize a potential customer.  That could be bad for business and lead to very harsh punishments...

 The owner, with her voice seeming to welcome him with open arms, greeted him, but she never left her large highly adorned desk.  There were armed soldiers in plain clothes stationed around her and on both sides of the doors, as well as other parts of the room.  And there were a few out side, two directly on the other side of the double doors he had just come from.  He had been checked to make sure he was not carrying any weapons inside among other things before he came in.  The guards were to insure none of the law ever tried to take the girls by force or to shut their business down.  The soldiers here were more well armed than the local police and establishments like this even held more political power.  There was a stair case behind her, that led upstairs to what was deemed, the “Pleasure Rooms”.

 Here in Gerudo Province, anything you desired, anything at all... would be met.  In this part of the country, black markets ruled; anything from illegal games, movies, weapons and drugs, to illegal pornography and worse yet, the slave trade was available for the right price...  Women and girls of all ages were bought and traded for various reasons at ridiculously low prices and then used and abused for an untold sum of money by clients.  A girl could sleep with ten to twenty buyers a night and beaten and choked for her troubles.  She could never leave and was forever treated as a slave, until such time as she either died by the hand of her employer/client or became useless and discarded back on the streets, which most likely meant assured death anyway.  In this land and culture, being raped or a prostitute, even if forced into working, even if sold by her own parents or grandparents or who ever the caregiver might have been, brought a great dishonour to the family of the victim and they would not allow such a person to return home or else disgrace everyone she ever knew and loved.  Not only that, but none of the men felt the need to wear condoms and sexually transmitted diseases were rampant amongst the girls.  Some were dieing and would not live even to reach adult hood...

 This was a paradise for men and women who preferred the young variety or who were a bit rougher in nature and could put the slaves through their cruel paces with out threat of reprisal or condemnation from society.  It was also a place for the well off and dignified, even those traveling all the way from Hyrule to enjoy a little cruelty at a young girl's expense and they were perfectly protected under diplomatic immunity.  Although in effect, the immunity did not allow for such barbaric acts, it still led those who thought it did to commit such atrocities or those who had higher connections to live out their fantasies and almost nothing could touch them...  And this place was all about fantasy.  The young man even thought he noticed a fellow by the name of Trevor on the couch with a young girl, his long pointed ears clearly visible and his boyish good looks shinning through.  He too wore dark glasses and a suit...

“My name is Lady.  You're new around here... so what's your pleasure, Dear?”, the woman with long red hair asked.  “See anything you like and want to enjoy?  Or for that matter, don't like and want to punish?”  Her smile was wicked as she licked her lips sinfully and she held out her fag from a long ivory cigarette holder with velvety red gloves.  The young man could tell by her demeanor that she was also foul in her treatment to her own girls and she kept all the profit for herself and her well armed militia.  There were other “shops” or brothels, and although they too were illegal, this one, or so he had been informed confidentially by others, catered to some of the most sick and perverse.  And that is why he had come...

 He did not say anything, but he did in fact nod.  “The silent and strong type I see... with maybe a little bit of shyness...”, she noted his sun glasses covering his eyes.  “That's alright, we take all kinds here, even devils and demons if you got the money, honey.”  She cackled as she stood up and the two personal guards walked with her, but stayed a pace or two at her sides.  She went to the row of standing girls who were not preoccupied by the other clients at the present moment and ran her soft gloved hands over some, enjoying watching them squirm.

 The new customer just watched and looked at each girl and then to the men on the couch, who seemed to already be enjoying their quarry and who would be taking them upstairs to where the real fun began most likely in short order.  “How about her?”, she asked as she pointed to one almost of age and the figure clad in dark green brought his attention to her and just shrugged, the young woman looked relieved.  Another was pulled from the line and then shoved back when again the man said nothing nor gave any willing inclination.  Then a very young girl, who had been hiding behind her older sister he presumed, was pulled out from behind her, the older sibling clearly showing signs of being beaten previously, was struck with the butt of a rifle from one of the guards when she tried to help the little one and she fell back against the wall clutching her stomach.

 The woman pulled her away from the other girls, pushing her into the middle and into the young man.  The little girl looked up at him wide eyed with bruises on her face, arms and legs.  “We just received these two yesterday and have been breaking them in...  You can have her if she is to your liking.”, Lady said.

 The man looked down at her and knelt, spinning her around, the little girl hardly giving any fight.  She had visible signs of torture from cigarette burns on her body, red blotches around her neck from strong hands and she was shaking looking scared to death.   He looked so big and tall to her.  The man nodded his approval and asked if she had any more like her.  The woman looked surprised and threw her head back laughing.  “I like a man with a large sexual appetite.  However, she is our youngest, but you can have her sister as well or any of the others not being currently preoccupied.”

“How much for the whole lot?”, he asked nonchalantly.....
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Sweet Jesus... :wow: that was the first thought that ran through my head when I saw this... well actually there was another thought, but trying to keep it clean for the youngsters and the filtered “Holly [Crap]” just doesn't cut it. ^^; You really need to go the page to see it in style.

Another brilliant and wonderful illustration done by the very talented EzzieSkull. :squee: My jaw dropped when I saw it. :jawdrop: And I am still having trouble keeping it in place. =D It has just about everything in it so far from the story, at least that is appropriate anyway. Very well done! :clap: I will be updating all of my story pages, but will only alert my Watchers once so you can see it. I am not sure when I will finish the story, since I have other stories I am working on at the moment... Enjoy!

Part 1 of 3. I had been working on this a while back and then stopped in favor of other stories. Enjoy...
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OcarinaGreen Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This looks really rood :D I seriously love your writing style. You never fail to describe something, and keep a beautiful, clear picture in the readers mind! I really want to read the rest now ^_^
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LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Thank you. :aww: I think I have gotten better over the short time I have been here. I have always had a knack for describing things, however, as some pointed out, I had too much of it, so I had to scale it back. ^^; (I still have to go back to my original stories and fix them... :ohmygod: ) I do not read much so this is pretty much all just trial and error. Thanks again. :nod:
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OcarinaGreen Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well you're a pretty talented writer, I hope you keep at it! :D
And you're welcome ^_^
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LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Oh I will, I have so many stories in my head it is not even funny... some as you have seen I started, but never finished and some I have not even started writing yet. You are a pretty talented artist yourself and a great cosplayer. :nod:
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OcarinaGreen Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Aw thanks ^_^
I can't wait to read the rest of your stories :D
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EzzieLynn Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow ... I guess it does look good.
XD Sorry, sometimes when I finish a really difficult piece I start having doubts, but it actually does look pretty good.
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LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
I just wish you could click on it to see it even better. But that is what links are for. =D Thanks again! :squee:
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EzzieLynn Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
No problem, mi amigo!
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LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Do you know Japanese? :?
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