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In the Darkness
I can see You...

As if You were beside me
and had never let me go...

Even when I close my eyes
at night, You are there...

But I know you are holding and
being held by someone else now...

And it kills me,
every single time...

The heart wrenching tears that I cry,
should at least blur my vision of You...

To deter or hide away,
Your haunting beauty...

But they do not and
I carry on suffering...

I cover my shuttered eye lids
with the palms of my hands...

As if to deny,
all possible light...

I grind the heals into them,
but I start seeing bright stars...

And alas, You're still here
torturing me sadistically...

I scream in anguish,
but no one dares care...

As if in silence, a pain
only I can bear...

Desperately, I take my sharpened quill
and plunge it into my eyes...

Leaving only bare sockets to remain,
on my pride-less blood stained face...

Now blind and truly in Darkness,
I find my mind continues to see You...

There's no escape, no relief
and I am Forever Yours.....
I had actually started writing this months ago on paper, but I had never actually finished it. This is even a shorter version of the one I had initially started and may also do later. It means just as much now, as it did then, if not even more so... It is also probably where the idea for the quill pen came from... But thankfully even I knew if I tried, it was the mind and my heart, not my eyes, that had control over what I saw. And my mind and heart is rather weak... Enjoy... :( :no: :depressed:
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NSkye Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Photographer
Very moving, great job!
LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Thank you.
Winter995 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Can you please send me the longer version
LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
I have not finished it yet. Once I have, I will post it. It wont be for a while though, I already have other stuff in the works.
Nihanna97 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
This was so beautifull!~~
QuQ <3
LinkNZeldaForever Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
Nihanna97 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Your welcome!~~ ^w^/
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